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聪明的狐狸爸爸

Ladies and gentlemen,
欢迎来到琸阅小剧场 !
今天我们将欣赏由琸阅学员Sean Lin 
倾情续写的Fantastic Mr.Fox
这只聪明的狐狸爸爸后来怎么样了?
Sean对此有怎样的奇思妙想呢?
“达尔先生都会会心一笑”的结尾是什么呢?

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【 Fantastic Mr. Fox 2 】
原书作者: Roald Dahl
续写作者: Sean Lin
主要人物: Mr. Fox / Bunce / Bean / Boggis 
类型: 亲情 / 冒险
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Previously on  Fantastic Mr. Fox 
(前情提要)

凶恶的农场主Boggis, Bunce, Bean发觉Mr. Fox在他们的农场里抓取家禽,决心不惜一切代价杀死狐狸一家。他们在狐狸先生的家门口埋伏,甚至开来了挖掘机,连山都差点挖空。

在这样危及的时刻,狐狸先生并没有放弃希望。反而另辟蹊径,带领一家人改变挖掘方向。不但逃过了一劫,还带领偶遇的獾一家来到Boggis’s Chicken House, Bunce’s Mighty Storehouse, Bean’s Secret Cider Cellar,大获丰收。

故事的最后,狐狸爸爸和其他小动物们举行了盛大的宴会。而三个农场主却依然在洞口等待。达尔先生这样写道:
They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out.
And as far as I know, they are still waiting.

Sean Lin 的续写

据达尔先生所知,三个凶残的农场主一直在洞口等待狐狸先生一家。万一他们得知狐狸先生已经顺利逃脱,再也不会回到这个洞了,这三个农场主又会有怎样的对策呢? 琸阅的小学员Sean Lin 读完了这本原版书后,就产生了这样的疑问,他给这本书续写了一个有趣的结尾。下面就让我们来看看Sean的续写吧!

点击可听Sean Lin 的原声演绎

The farmer use up their energy,  then Bunce want to be friend of Mr. Fox.  

Mr. Fox was puzzled why Bunce want to be friend of mine.  Is he going to kill me? 
Mr. Fox thinks, but he said OK. The farmer is very happy. 

Haha,  Mr. Fox is not clever. He is so stupid. He does not know that we are going to kill him, said Boggis.
I have an idea to kill him,that invited  Mr. Fox to a party. And we will bang! bang-bang! said Bean. 
That’s a good idea. Let’s do it now ,said Bunce. 

That night, they made a big  invetesh and have a big dinner. The next morning, Mr. Fox read the invetashen and he puzzled again. Are they going to kill me? I want to be careful. Then he told his friend to dig a big hole on the way from the party to their hole home. And then he went to the party. 

The farmer were very happy to see Mr.Fox. They pulled their gun out. Mr. Fox run as fast as he could. He jumped over the hole and jump in to their hole house. The farmer fell into the hole and knew they were in trouble. 

They  yelled : Mr. Fox, you a silly fox, stupid fox, bad fox. As long as I know, they were still in the hole and yelling.
                                          –Sean Lin的续写

这份略显稚嫩的手稿图文并茂,虽然还存在着一些时态和拼写的小错误,但是小朋友的智慧与想象力令人称赞。

细细品读,可以发现续写部分完全沿袭了原作的人物性格。狐狸先生的机警、细心和聪明,农夫三人组的凶残暴戾在续写中有很好的体现,同时农夫假装做朋友实则设圈套的做法又使人物形象更为多元化。

续写的最后,Sean使用了与原书结尾同样的句型:As far as I know, they were still in the hole and yelling. 这份与作者的默契不禁令人会心一笑。

看完了Sean Lin 的续写,琸阅的小朋友们是不是也跃跃欲试了呢?如果有自己比较满意的作品(题材可为续写,但不限于续写),可以整理出来向琸阅公众号投稿,一经采用,会有稿费奖励哦!欢迎小朋友向我们投稿~

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